The Critic.

At Kibble Kitties......


"THE CRITIC IS HERE!!!!" Odie shouted ringing a little tiny bell. "WHAT!?" Kayos shouted.  The costumers starred at Kayos and Odie. "Let's discus this in the kitchen." Kayos whispered. Kayos was pushing Odie while starring at the costumers. "Ouch." Odie whispered, as Kayos accidentally pushed Odie into the wall. Then she backed up and  walked sideways then walked into the kitchen. "Who's the Critic?" Kayos asked whispering "B-A-B-Y  B-E-A-R!" Odie whispered. Kayos peeked out the window. "There's no one there!" Kayos whispered. "That's because he is not here yet. I saw him getting out of  his car while I was cleaning garbage. He had a name tag. and it said Mr.Critic. Odie whispered. Baby bear walked in the bakery. "He's here. Go see the food critic yourself Katheryn obvious." Odie whispered. "Did you say Katheryn?" Kayos answered. "Yes." Odie said with a proud face. " It's Captain Obvious." said Kayos. "Huh?" Odie asked with a look. "Forget it." Kayos said while looking out the window. "He is the critic." Kayos said looking out the window. "Kayos, what are you doing in the kitchen? Your supposed to be taking orders." Sarafina said while writing down a shopping list. "The critic's here." Kayos said as her eyes widened. "Who is it?" Sarafina asked. "Baby bear." Odie said. "That guy freaks me out. He's a layer then he's a pastor. Then a doctor. And now a food critic?" Sarafina said. "If he's the critic then we just can't stand here. He needs to  report our bakery. Chop chop!" said Sarafina. "Man she's just like my mother." Kayos whispered. "I heard that!" Sarafina shouted. "Fluffy! Your the critic's waiter." said Kayos. "I'm not going out there! I will tinkle." said Fluffy. "Just get out there." said Kayos as she pushed Fluffy out of the kitchen. Fluffy walked up to Baby Bear. "Hello my name's Fluffy, may I help you?" said Fluffy. "Did you wet your self?" Baby Bear asked. "Uhhh?" Fluffy said while shaking her legs.  "NO!" Fluffy lied in a shaky tone. "I will ha-" Baby bear was about to say his order but Fluffy wasn't there!  "What are you doing in the kitchen?!" Kayos screamed. "I told you, I had to tinkle." said Fluffy in a quiet voice.  "Then go!" said Kayos in a angry face.
"Angel!" Kayos called. Angel is a yellow littlest pet shop kitten. "You are going to fill the orders." said Kayos. "Now go." said Kayos as she pushed Angel out the doors.  "Hello sir, my name is Angel and I will be your waiter. Now how may I help you?" Angel asked. "I would like some honey tea with honey cone on top." said Baby Bear. "Coming right up." said Angel.

Later....

"Here is your honey cone sir." said Angel as she gave Baby Bear his tea.  "Anything else?" asked Angel.  "Well?" Baby Bear leaned back on his chair and thought for awhile.

Several orders later...

"Are you satisfied sir?" Angel asked. "Yes I am thank you." said Baby Bear. 3 teddy bear cops walked in Kibble Kitties for some donuts and coffee. One of the cops noticed something very strange. "Hey do you see that bear right there?" said the cop as he pointed right at Baby Bear. "Yeah." said a different bear. "Excuse me, but you under arrest!" said the cop.  "Who me?" Baby Bear asked. Sarafina walked in the room. "Whats going on?" Sarafina asked. "This bear has been faking to be a food critic." said a cop. "Are you going to pay for your bill?" said the cop while putting handcuffs on Baby Bear. "How much?" Baby Bear asked. "500 dollars."said Sarafina. "No." said Baby Bear. "Lets take him to the rack!" said the cop. A real food critic walked in. Sarafina saw the real food critic and she ran in the kitchen. "Kayos, get out the big cake!" shouted Sarafina.          

                            The End